paragraph about your holiday

My first holiday in kolej on septemberof year, family and i planning go to beach in negeri 9. We goes port dickson by new car. we travelling after pray zohor on tuesday 2006, spend 2 hour because my father buy a new car, so the engyn very picup. hahaha.... after arrive to pd, we check in on hotel sri Malaysia, in hotel have a swimmingpoll, gymnasium and room for performent sport like tennis, table tannis, qym and any more sport.
for the first day on evening, my brother and i going play table tannis in room sport. we enjoy enough because no pepole concer the place.tommorrow my father tell me and brother to go visit their friend recall pak cik ali, my brother tall he must follow father becouse after that my father as me join with he camping neaar besite pak cik ali in mountains brawo..
my moter and my sister don't join my father because my mother tell his and my sister have picnic beside the beach. we one family spend 3 day and 2 night to enjiy a holiday, after that we picking a beg and go back at home...